Post by Hunter on Feb 25, 2007 15:24:37 GMT -5
Book 1:Links to a new future
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Chapter 1:A road of blood
An evil laugh pierced the night sky, the scent of blood filling the air. The bodies of men were scattered around, a dark figure standing above them. "That was entertaining..." rang out a dark voice, "But no more playing around. I believe it is time to take the prize," The figure, as you may have asked, was seventeen year old Hunter Kirizaki, the man who was possessed by a demon named Retnuh.
Retnuh was a greedy demon who had a bloodlust to match that of two hundred bats combined into one wicked demon of pure evil. Retnuh's past was clouded, for Hunter had never asked about it, yet he never could, for he was possessed.
Retnuh walked towards a large castle and chuckled to himself as his maroon red hair spiked up, his red eyes staring into the darkness. The figure's red skin burned as he stepped towards the building. The figure wore no shirt, only one green sash over his chest and a pair of dark green Hakama. His dark claws burned with a dark aura. "These people shall learn to fear the name RETNUH!!" cried
Hunter entered the Castle's hall. Men stood before him, wielding a variety of weapons to try and subdue him. "You have no chance." Hunter said, holding up his claws. "So surrender now or I'll rip your souls out." he said, cutting a nearby wooden pole in half. The men showed no fear and charged towards him, raising their weapons. Hunter laughed at this and in a minute had slain all of them.
A man's scream rang out through the building as Hunter entered the lord's throne room. "Lord Katsu, I have the honor of meeting you." he said, laughing. "Give me all of your riches or I will kill you." he said, raising up his claw. The lord, terrified, pointed to where his treasure was kept. Hunter smiled and walked away.
Hunter entered the room and took all the jewels he could carry before leaving. "Nice doing business with you, Katsu." he said, chuckling to himself. He ran out the building, carrying his newfound fortune. The Lord sat on his throne, crying at all his men who had been killed, and all the riches lost.
Retnuh, two hours later, stalked the halls of a house, following a man. He took out his claws and held them back as if to lunge. The man turned, but it was too late. Retnuh's claws teared through his throat and blood poured onto Retnuh's fingers as he laughed. "Blood! The sweet nectar of life! It fills me with a strong emotion when I see it spilled!" said he as he tore his claws out. The man fell to his knees and toppled over. Retnuh licked his claws clean of the blood and smiled. "I am the strongest demon alive." he said, not caring that anyone heard. "AND IT WILL ALWAYS BE THAT WAY!
THUMP!
Retnuh turned to see a figure walking out of the darkness. "You? The strongest demon? Don't make me laugh you living pile of dirt and bones. You could never surpass me." said the demon as he came out of the darkness.
The figure wore a black coat and had a mace in his hand. He had blonde hair that flowed down onto his shoulders, and his red eyes were underlined with black paint. He had a dark voice, but it wasn't anywhere near as dark as Retnuhs.
"You have to possess a body to survive." continued the figure. "You are no match for..." He was cut off as a claw went through his heart.
"No match, eh? Speak of the devil, it seems you were destined to die by my hand." Said Retnuh before walking away. The figure fell to the ground, his life ended, as Retnuh ran out the door into the courtyard where bodies lay all around.
I haven't started it up strong yet but I really think I should start up a series on Hunter. I'm going to incorperate some drawings but the series will still be aimed at less childish people, due to the intense violence.
This used to just be a small story that I made to explain Hunter's past, but I'm going to turn it into the starting off chapter for my book. Wadya think?