Post by sacta on Mar 14, 2007 14:37:10 GMT -5
This RP sample is from Lily Blossom Academy, and it's my favorite RP fight until now. I am Slades Tolds there, recognized by some other members and self-proclaimed main character of the site >< (yes, you guessed it, he's one arrogant jerk) Here's the link to the thread: rurounikimu.proboards85.com/index.cgi?board=naruto&action=display&thread=1163531618&page=1
'I have spent more than five minutes blocking my father's attacks... that wasn't good. It was an intelligent plan at first, but mt father... he was weaker before. He surely has trained a lot before this fight. Blocking him I should have worn him out until being able to punch his attacks and hurt his wrists, weakening his punches. But I didn't think he could have advanced so much in such little time. If only I had dodged his punches from the very beginning... If I hadn't followed Joe's advice I would actually be unconscious right now. And anyway I did manage to hurt his right wrist. His attacks with that arm will be weaker.' Slades' left leg shook a little and he felt like he was going to drop to his left knee, unable to hold his weight. 'The truth is that I am seriously hurt... Everything seems to be moving because of that hit to the temple. My nose is bleeding so I can't breathe well and the blows to my body are affecting my legs... But he's also tired, I have to keep that in mind.'
Slades almost felt that his eyes were about to shut. Everything went blurred and he felt that his neck couldn't hold his head any longer. Slowly, Slades almost fell face first on the floor. At the very last moment he recovered his consciousness and he moved his right foot forward to stand up. He grunted a little, noticing that the fight had become a race against the clock. The floor around him was covered by his own blood, which was escaping his body because of the many scratches. 'I... almost went down... I have to finish this as fast as I can... or...' With a grunt of pain, Slades stood up completely again. Once more, Alexander was just watching, hoping Slades wouldn't be able to stand up and he would fall on the floor.
'At first glance I would say he won't be able to stand for more than five more minutes. After that, he will faint because of the loss of blood. But making this fight last one bit longer will be just too cruel.' Alexander narrowed his eyes. 'So stand up Slades. This will put an end to everything!' Alexander then crouched a little and after lowering his waist, he rushed forward ready to give the coup de grace. Slades wouldn't be able to dodge it anyway. Alexander raised his right fist ready to throw a punch at Slades' face. 'Just give up!!!'
'To Hell with caution and strategy!' Slades thought as he tried to stand up and he saw his father coming at him. It was as if everything was going at slow motion. 'This is not my style! If I had paid heed to Joe from the very beginning this wouldn't have happened, but now it is too late anyway! So I will better use my own fighting style! 'Hold your ground and block'... that's for weaklings!!! Just move!'
Mark's eyes opened widely. 'I... impossible!' He was really worried one moment ago, but suddenly a new emotion was filling his old heart. How could that happen?! And the same for Alexander. He was as surprised as Mark if not more! Slades had also rushed forward to meet him in the very center of the ring. And Alexander was almost terrified by Slades' speed, he hadn't even seen him coming. But now his son was right in front of him throwing his left fist forward. It was a simultaneous exchange. Slades fist connected with Alexander. "Argh!" The man grunted in pain as he felt how his Chi turned against him again and his arm was blown backwards. 'No!' His side was completely defenseless now and he couldn't defend himself in that position. "I will show you!" Slades yelled as he retaliated and he landed his left fist on Alexander's ribs. Again, the man grunted feeling a horrible pain. Even although both had felt the damage when their punches connected, Slades hadn't wasted his time and he had landed that powerful liver blow that was about to crush Alexander's ribs.
Alexander stepped back trying to stop the pain, but he noticed that he would have time to recover, since Slades was ready to attack again. Alexander desperately tried to hit Slades in the face with a left hook, but again his fist just met Slades', being blown away like it had happened before with the right arm. Slades' physical power was strong enough to surpass his father's energy. But this time Slades didn't withdraw his right arm. He had stopped his father's left hook with a right hook, and now his fist was still following its initial trajectory until it hit Alexander in the face. Alexander's head was blown to the side as he spat some blood. Slades had hit so hard that for one moment one would say his fist had sunk into his father's face as if it was rubber.
'This is my final attack. There I go!' Slades thought as he kept punching his father in the face and body. A right uppercut made his father's head be blown backwards. 'It's too brutal. I feel my brain flying inside my head. If I just had known he was this strong...' Alexander tried to stand up and try to hit his son with a right straight. Yet again, his fist only hit Slades' hand. "Ugh!!!" It wasn't only on the face. Alexander's neck was starting to feel the pain after his head had been violently blown away so many times. 'I can't keep like this... I have to go all out as well!!!' Alexander stepped back quickly to dodge one more of Slades' attacks. But as soon as he landed, his legs propelled him forward again. It quickly became a brawl. Alexander landed a punch on Slades' face using the energy of all his body. At the same time, Slades gathered all his strength and determination to ignore the pain and throw a punch at his father's stomach, which was unprotected, with his left arm. The uppercut made Alexander grunt, but he didn't stop.
Both began to just hit each other using legs, elbows, fists, knees and headbutts. 'If I only hadn't used that... I would have won already. I shouldn't have understimated him!' Blood from both fighters was flying everywhere as even Alexander was starting to get cuts on his face because of Slades' powerful punches. Anyway, Slades was starting to lose terrain. His father was starting to hit faster and harder than his son. Although the punches weren't as powerful as he would like to because of Slades' previous attack, he was finally, after more than ten minutes of brutal brawling, starting to have some advantage. In fact, Slades could feel how his body was giving up. He was exhausted. All his muscles were stiffening and the scratches hurt a lot. His brain was still affected by the punch to the temple and his legs were starting to give up. Besides, because of the never-ending attacks of Alexander, he couldn't breathe correctly.
A lateral kick landed on Slades' jaw. It was a wonder how it didn't break. But Alexander didn't lower his right leg. Instead, he put his knee close to his chest bending his leg and then extending it, hitting Slades in the stomach, like a spring. Slades almost puked, but in fact, everything that left his mouth was a lot of blood. This time Alexander did put his foot one the floor, but only to spin around and to hit Slades with a roundhouse kick with his left leg, his heel landing on Slades' cheek and making him spit more blood. Then Alexander stepped forward retaliating really quick from the kick he had just done and he lowered his waist while Slades was bending because of the pain. Alexander used the strength of his lower body to land an left uppercut on Slades' face.
'No... No please... don't give up yet. This is not over...' He told to himself as he felt how his body was lifted from the floor because of that powerful punch to his head. 'I haven't been training for nothing. I have tried too hard to give up now... And there're people who trust on me.' The world was slowly fading to darkness as Slades' eyes started to shut while his body was still in the air. 'Damn it... Stand up! Please stand up!'
"It's time to finish this... once and for all!" Alexander yelled as he rushed forward. He was going to smash Slades' head against the floor punching him in the middle of the face once he landed on the floor. 'Get up... Get up!!!' Slades thought feeling his father coming at him. He felt his feet touching the floor again and how his back was getting closer and closer to the floor. With all his will power for victory, Slades brought his left foot backwards to stop his fall before his back connected with the floor. His upper body was almost parallel to the floor, but he was able to use his weakened abdominal to stand up. He felt a horrible pain in that muscles because of the many hits he had received there, but he didn't give up.
When Alexander was close enough to Slades to give him the finishing blow, he found himself being face to face with his son. Now he was defenseless again, with his right arm raised and having Slades too close to him to punch him in that position. Slades punched his father using all his strength with a right straight. 'No way!!! This is impossible!' Alexander was pushed away by the punch, stopping some feet away with his nose bledding badly. This time, he didn't try to counter-attack when Slades rushed forward again. Out of panic, he just covered himself with his arms putting them in an X shape. Slades' punch were now too powerful to try to counter him. 'What's wrong?! What is this pressure?! He should be past his limits already. But I don't dare to move.' Alexander's eyes opened widely as he noticed something: Slades' eyes were completely in blank. Again, Slades was fighting being completely unconscious. He didn't feel pain, nor exhaustion. His body was moving with the only help of its unconscious mind.
'This is impossible! It can't be! No one could hit so hard being unconscious!' Slades' attacks were starting to break through Alexander's guard. 'This is too much. My arms won't be able to stand any longer. Thi... this will awake him and remind him of his futility!' Alexander punched Slades with all his strength in the solar plexus. 'How was that?!' He thought as he grinned, feeling his fist sink into Slades' stomach. But his happiness didn't last for long. Soon a punch landed on his face, blowing his head away. 'He hung on! But he's conscious now! How it come he doesn't feel the pain. He should be begging for mercy on the floor right now!' He was starting to grow very tired. The temperature around Slades was so high he was starting to suffocate and his arms weren't able to stand Slades' merciless attack.
Alexander was slowly losing terrain, getting closer and closer to the wall. 'I won't be able to stand it! And I just can't find the way to counter-attack. He will keep attacking me anyway!' Even if Alexander tried his best attack on Slades or the most painful one he could imagine, Slades would keep attacking, like if his life was on the stake. "Now I am going to finish this!!!" Slades yelled as he broke through Alexander's guard with a right uppercut, leaving his father's chest unprotected. Alexander panicked. He knew what was coming now, it was exactly the same Aiasu had predicted one moment ago: the Hakkei punch.
Slades spread his legs with his left one forward and the left one backwards. Without turning his waist yet, landed a punch on Alexander's chest. He was ready to finish him with his most powerful attack, but exactly when Slades felt he was going to win for sure, something started hurting his shoulder. When Slades noticed what it was, his eyes shut open. "In most punches, the energy has to flow through the shoulders. The Hakkei punch isn't a exception." Alexander explained as Slades noticed that his father's hands were around his shoulder paralyzing it. The Chi of Alexander was truly painful, since the pressure it created was now wrapping around Slades' shoulder. "Besides... if you try the Hakkei punch, I will break your shoulder with your own strength." Slades knew perfectly Alexander wasn't bluffing. In that position, Slades would break his shoulder if he attacked. But anyway, he grinned. "I have through worse..." He murmured...
Alexander was in such pain that he couldn't even grunt although the horrible suffering. Slades felt how his shoulder blade was shattering and breaking into many pieces. It was also terribly painful, but at least it wasn't a hit that could knock someone out, while the Hakkei punch was ment to finish with Alexander. Slades had started twisting his body. All his muscles hurt, but he had to use most of them to perform that attack and make all his energy flow towards his fist. The members from the Cell who were sitting behind Alexander's side had to cover their eyes and one of them held his hat with his right hand so it didn't fly away. The pressure generated by the Hakkei punch was generating almost a small hurricane. "What the Hell...?!" Yelled one of them annoyed.
All of Slades' energy traveled through his arm towards his wrist and finally his hand, sending Alexander away. In the air, Alexander spat lots of blood as a crater seemed to be formed on his chest. He hit his head with the floor and started rolling on the ring like a piece of paper being blown away by the wind. He ended on the floor face-first, motionless.
Slades was trying to stand up again, since the Hakkei punch required to bend one's legs slightly. He was exhausted, but he had won!!! 'Yes... yes!' "Alright!!!" He exclaimed raising his fists with a huge smile on his face. The guys from the gym and all those who were with Slades started shouting happily. One more victory for Slades... or was it? Everyone stood silent, even Slades who just felt as if he was paralyzed. The guys from the Cell smiled, and so did all those who preferred to see Slades lose. Alexander was up again! He was bleeding badly and his body was filled with bruises. The clothes had been torn apart in the zone where the Hakkey punch had connected. But his eyes seemed to say that he wasn't done yet.
He was scary, almost terrifying, now that he was angry. His eyes seemed to be penetrating Slades' very soul. He was clenching his fists as he stared angrily at his son. "You asked for it..." He growled as he got into an orthodox boxing stance. Slades was still so stunned that he couldn't move. Why? He had given it his best... and even after having been so close to sacrifying himself, it still wasn't enough to finish him!
'I have spent more than five minutes blocking my father's attacks... that wasn't good. It was an intelligent plan at first, but mt father... he was weaker before. He surely has trained a lot before this fight. Blocking him I should have worn him out until being able to punch his attacks and hurt his wrists, weakening his punches. But I didn't think he could have advanced so much in such little time. If only I had dodged his punches from the very beginning... If I hadn't followed Joe's advice I would actually be unconscious right now. And anyway I did manage to hurt his right wrist. His attacks with that arm will be weaker.' Slades' left leg shook a little and he felt like he was going to drop to his left knee, unable to hold his weight. 'The truth is that I am seriously hurt... Everything seems to be moving because of that hit to the temple. My nose is bleeding so I can't breathe well and the blows to my body are affecting my legs... But he's also tired, I have to keep that in mind.'
Slades almost felt that his eyes were about to shut. Everything went blurred and he felt that his neck couldn't hold his head any longer. Slowly, Slades almost fell face first on the floor. At the very last moment he recovered his consciousness and he moved his right foot forward to stand up. He grunted a little, noticing that the fight had become a race against the clock. The floor around him was covered by his own blood, which was escaping his body because of the many scratches. 'I... almost went down... I have to finish this as fast as I can... or...' With a grunt of pain, Slades stood up completely again. Once more, Alexander was just watching, hoping Slades wouldn't be able to stand up and he would fall on the floor.
'At first glance I would say he won't be able to stand for more than five more minutes. After that, he will faint because of the loss of blood. But making this fight last one bit longer will be just too cruel.' Alexander narrowed his eyes. 'So stand up Slades. This will put an end to everything!' Alexander then crouched a little and after lowering his waist, he rushed forward ready to give the coup de grace. Slades wouldn't be able to dodge it anyway. Alexander raised his right fist ready to throw a punch at Slades' face. 'Just give up!!!'
'To Hell with caution and strategy!' Slades thought as he tried to stand up and he saw his father coming at him. It was as if everything was going at slow motion. 'This is not my style! If I had paid heed to Joe from the very beginning this wouldn't have happened, but now it is too late anyway! So I will better use my own fighting style! 'Hold your ground and block'... that's for weaklings!!! Just move!'
Mark's eyes opened widely. 'I... impossible!' He was really worried one moment ago, but suddenly a new emotion was filling his old heart. How could that happen?! And the same for Alexander. He was as surprised as Mark if not more! Slades had also rushed forward to meet him in the very center of the ring. And Alexander was almost terrified by Slades' speed, he hadn't even seen him coming. But now his son was right in front of him throwing his left fist forward. It was a simultaneous exchange. Slades fist connected with Alexander. "Argh!" The man grunted in pain as he felt how his Chi turned against him again and his arm was blown backwards. 'No!' His side was completely defenseless now and he couldn't defend himself in that position. "I will show you!" Slades yelled as he retaliated and he landed his left fist on Alexander's ribs. Again, the man grunted feeling a horrible pain. Even although both had felt the damage when their punches connected, Slades hadn't wasted his time and he had landed that powerful liver blow that was about to crush Alexander's ribs.
Alexander stepped back trying to stop the pain, but he noticed that he would have time to recover, since Slades was ready to attack again. Alexander desperately tried to hit Slades in the face with a left hook, but again his fist just met Slades', being blown away like it had happened before with the right arm. Slades' physical power was strong enough to surpass his father's energy. But this time Slades didn't withdraw his right arm. He had stopped his father's left hook with a right hook, and now his fist was still following its initial trajectory until it hit Alexander in the face. Alexander's head was blown to the side as he spat some blood. Slades had hit so hard that for one moment one would say his fist had sunk into his father's face as if it was rubber.
'This is my final attack. There I go!' Slades thought as he kept punching his father in the face and body. A right uppercut made his father's head be blown backwards. 'It's too brutal. I feel my brain flying inside my head. If I just had known he was this strong...' Alexander tried to stand up and try to hit his son with a right straight. Yet again, his fist only hit Slades' hand. "Ugh!!!" It wasn't only on the face. Alexander's neck was starting to feel the pain after his head had been violently blown away so many times. 'I can't keep like this... I have to go all out as well!!!' Alexander stepped back quickly to dodge one more of Slades' attacks. But as soon as he landed, his legs propelled him forward again. It quickly became a brawl. Alexander landed a punch on Slades' face using the energy of all his body. At the same time, Slades gathered all his strength and determination to ignore the pain and throw a punch at his father's stomach, which was unprotected, with his left arm. The uppercut made Alexander grunt, but he didn't stop.
Both began to just hit each other using legs, elbows, fists, knees and headbutts. 'If I only hadn't used that... I would have won already. I shouldn't have understimated him!' Blood from both fighters was flying everywhere as even Alexander was starting to get cuts on his face because of Slades' powerful punches. Anyway, Slades was starting to lose terrain. His father was starting to hit faster and harder than his son. Although the punches weren't as powerful as he would like to because of Slades' previous attack, he was finally, after more than ten minutes of brutal brawling, starting to have some advantage. In fact, Slades could feel how his body was giving up. He was exhausted. All his muscles were stiffening and the scratches hurt a lot. His brain was still affected by the punch to the temple and his legs were starting to give up. Besides, because of the never-ending attacks of Alexander, he couldn't breathe correctly.
A lateral kick landed on Slades' jaw. It was a wonder how it didn't break. But Alexander didn't lower his right leg. Instead, he put his knee close to his chest bending his leg and then extending it, hitting Slades in the stomach, like a spring. Slades almost puked, but in fact, everything that left his mouth was a lot of blood. This time Alexander did put his foot one the floor, but only to spin around and to hit Slades with a roundhouse kick with his left leg, his heel landing on Slades' cheek and making him spit more blood. Then Alexander stepped forward retaliating really quick from the kick he had just done and he lowered his waist while Slades was bending because of the pain. Alexander used the strength of his lower body to land an left uppercut on Slades' face.
'No... No please... don't give up yet. This is not over...' He told to himself as he felt how his body was lifted from the floor because of that powerful punch to his head. 'I haven't been training for nothing. I have tried too hard to give up now... And there're people who trust on me.' The world was slowly fading to darkness as Slades' eyes started to shut while his body was still in the air. 'Damn it... Stand up! Please stand up!'
"It's time to finish this... once and for all!" Alexander yelled as he rushed forward. He was going to smash Slades' head against the floor punching him in the middle of the face once he landed on the floor. 'Get up... Get up!!!' Slades thought feeling his father coming at him. He felt his feet touching the floor again and how his back was getting closer and closer to the floor. With all his will power for victory, Slades brought his left foot backwards to stop his fall before his back connected with the floor. His upper body was almost parallel to the floor, but he was able to use his weakened abdominal to stand up. He felt a horrible pain in that muscles because of the many hits he had received there, but he didn't give up.
When Alexander was close enough to Slades to give him the finishing blow, he found himself being face to face with his son. Now he was defenseless again, with his right arm raised and having Slades too close to him to punch him in that position. Slades punched his father using all his strength with a right straight. 'No way!!! This is impossible!' Alexander was pushed away by the punch, stopping some feet away with his nose bledding badly. This time, he didn't try to counter-attack when Slades rushed forward again. Out of panic, he just covered himself with his arms putting them in an X shape. Slades' punch were now too powerful to try to counter him. 'What's wrong?! What is this pressure?! He should be past his limits already. But I don't dare to move.' Alexander's eyes opened widely as he noticed something: Slades' eyes were completely in blank. Again, Slades was fighting being completely unconscious. He didn't feel pain, nor exhaustion. His body was moving with the only help of its unconscious mind.
'This is impossible! It can't be! No one could hit so hard being unconscious!' Slades' attacks were starting to break through Alexander's guard. 'This is too much. My arms won't be able to stand any longer. Thi... this will awake him and remind him of his futility!' Alexander punched Slades with all his strength in the solar plexus. 'How was that?!' He thought as he grinned, feeling his fist sink into Slades' stomach. But his happiness didn't last for long. Soon a punch landed on his face, blowing his head away. 'He hung on! But he's conscious now! How it come he doesn't feel the pain. He should be begging for mercy on the floor right now!' He was starting to grow very tired. The temperature around Slades was so high he was starting to suffocate and his arms weren't able to stand Slades' merciless attack.
Alexander was slowly losing terrain, getting closer and closer to the wall. 'I won't be able to stand it! And I just can't find the way to counter-attack. He will keep attacking me anyway!' Even if Alexander tried his best attack on Slades or the most painful one he could imagine, Slades would keep attacking, like if his life was on the stake. "Now I am going to finish this!!!" Slades yelled as he broke through Alexander's guard with a right uppercut, leaving his father's chest unprotected. Alexander panicked. He knew what was coming now, it was exactly the same Aiasu had predicted one moment ago: the Hakkei punch.
Slades spread his legs with his left one forward and the left one backwards. Without turning his waist yet, landed a punch on Alexander's chest. He was ready to finish him with his most powerful attack, but exactly when Slades felt he was going to win for sure, something started hurting his shoulder. When Slades noticed what it was, his eyes shut open. "In most punches, the energy has to flow through the shoulders. The Hakkei punch isn't a exception." Alexander explained as Slades noticed that his father's hands were around his shoulder paralyzing it. The Chi of Alexander was truly painful, since the pressure it created was now wrapping around Slades' shoulder. "Besides... if you try the Hakkei punch, I will break your shoulder with your own strength." Slades knew perfectly Alexander wasn't bluffing. In that position, Slades would break his shoulder if he attacked. But anyway, he grinned. "I have through worse..." He murmured...
Alexander was in such pain that he couldn't even grunt although the horrible suffering. Slades felt how his shoulder blade was shattering and breaking into many pieces. It was also terribly painful, but at least it wasn't a hit that could knock someone out, while the Hakkei punch was ment to finish with Alexander. Slades had started twisting his body. All his muscles hurt, but he had to use most of them to perform that attack and make all his energy flow towards his fist. The members from the Cell who were sitting behind Alexander's side had to cover their eyes and one of them held his hat with his right hand so it didn't fly away. The pressure generated by the Hakkei punch was generating almost a small hurricane. "What the Hell...?!" Yelled one of them annoyed.
All of Slades' energy traveled through his arm towards his wrist and finally his hand, sending Alexander away. In the air, Alexander spat lots of blood as a crater seemed to be formed on his chest. He hit his head with the floor and started rolling on the ring like a piece of paper being blown away by the wind. He ended on the floor face-first, motionless.
Slades was trying to stand up again, since the Hakkei punch required to bend one's legs slightly. He was exhausted, but he had won!!! 'Yes... yes!' "Alright!!!" He exclaimed raising his fists with a huge smile on his face. The guys from the gym and all those who were with Slades started shouting happily. One more victory for Slades... or was it? Everyone stood silent, even Slades who just felt as if he was paralyzed. The guys from the Cell smiled, and so did all those who preferred to see Slades lose. Alexander was up again! He was bleeding badly and his body was filled with bruises. The clothes had been torn apart in the zone where the Hakkey punch had connected. But his eyes seemed to say that he wasn't done yet.
He was scary, almost terrifying, now that he was angry. His eyes seemed to be penetrating Slades' very soul. He was clenching his fists as he stared angrily at his son. "You asked for it..." He growled as he got into an orthodox boxing stance. Slades was still so stunned that he couldn't move. Why? He had given it his best... and even after having been so close to sacrifying himself, it still wasn't enough to finish him!
